LANGUAGE
ARTS
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Grammar
and Usage
In the following sentences, four parts of each
sentence are underlined. If you think any one of the underlined parts is
incorrect, choose the letter under that part as your answer. If you think the
sentence is correct as written, choose (E) as your answer. Please note: read
together, all of the sentences in this section make up a story.
1. Disneyland
Park,
originally Disneyland, are
the first of two theme parks built at the Disneyland Resort in Anaheim, California.
No error.
A: ARE should be replaced with
IS. One theme park IS; many theme parks ARE.
2. Disneyland
opened its doors on July 17 1955. No error.
A: You need a comma
after “17” and before “1955”
3. It is the only
theme park designed and built under the direct supervision of walt Disney. No error.
A: “Walt” and “Disney” must be capitalized. You must always
capitalize a person’s name.
4. It was originally
the only attraction on the property. However it was
slightly renamed to distinguish it from the expanding complex in the 1990s. No error.
A: You need a comma
after “however” and before “it”
5. Walt Disney came
up with the concept of “Disneyland” after visiting various amusement
parks with his daughters in the 1930s and 1940s. No error.
A: No Error
6. He initially
envisioned building a tourist attraction adjacent to his studios
in Burbank
to entertain fans that wished to visit. No error.
A: THAT should be
replaced with WHO. Fans are people, and people are always WHO not THAT.
7. However, he soon
realized that the proposed sight was too small. No error.
A: SIGHT should be
replaced with SITE. SIGHT deals with “vision” while SITE deals with place or
location.
8. After hiring a
consultant to help him determine a appropriate site for his project,
Walt bought a 160-acre site near Anaheim in 1953. No error.
A: “a” should be
replaced with “an”. Always use the article “an” when it precedes a letter
starting with a vowel (a,e,i, o,u)
9. Construction
began in 1954 and the park was unveiled during a special televised
press event on the ABC television network on July 17 1955. No error.
A: you need a “comma”
after “17” and before “1955”
10. Since their
opening, Disneyland has undergone a number of expansions and
renovations, including the addition of New
Orleans Square in 1966, Bear Country (now Critter
Country) in 1972, and Mickey's
Toontown in 1993. No
error.
A: THEIR should be
replaced with ITS because all of Disneyland is one entity. 11. 11. Disney
California Adventure Park was built on the site of Disneylands
original parking lot and opened in 2001. No error.
A: “Disneyland’s”: You
need an apostrophe to show possession.
12: Disneyland has a larger
cumulative attendance then any other theme park in the world, with over
650 million guests since it opened.
No error.
A: THEN should be replaced with
THAN. Use THEN to show time sequence. Use THAN to compare. For example: “She is
taller THAN I am,” versus, “First THEN second”
13. In 2011, the park
hosted approximately 16.14 million guests, making them the second
most visited park in the world that calendar year. No error.
A: THEM should be replaced with
IT. The park …. making IT the second most visited. Gotcha!
14. According to a March
2005 report from the Disney Company, there are 65,700 jobs supported
by the Disneyland Resort. No error.
A: No error.
15. The concept for
Disneyland began when Walt Disney was visiting Griffith Park in los angeles
with his daughters Diane and Sharon. No error.
A: “Los Angeles” – always
capitalize the name of a city.
16. While watching them
ride the merry-go-round,
he came up with the idea of a place where adults and there children
could go and have fun together, though his dream lay dormant for many
years. No error.
A: THERE should be replaced
with THEIR. Use THERE for location; use THEIR to show possession.
17. He may have also
been influenced by his fathers memories of the World's
Columbian Exposition of 1893 in Chicago (his father worked at the Exposition).
A: “Father’s” – you need to
connote possession. No error.
18. While people wrote letters
to Disney about visiting the Walt Disney Studios,
he realized that a functional movie studio had little to offer to
visiting fans, and began to foster ideas of building a site near the Burbank studios
for tourists to visit. No error.
A: No error.
19. His ideas evolved to
a small play park with a boat ride and other themed areas. The initial
concept, the Mickey Mouse Park, started with a eight - acre
(3.2 ha) plot across Riverside Drive. No error.
A: “a” should be replaced with
“an”
20. He started to visit other
parks for inspiration and ideas, including Tivoli
Gardens in Denmark, Efteling in The
Netherlands and Greenfield
Village, Playland,
and Children's Fairyland in the United
States. His designers began working on concepts, though the project grew much
larger then the land could hold. No
error.
A: THAN not THEN.
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